try to keep it like this, dont make any generic changes.
and if i where you, i'd try to get the BPM to 137/138 dont know for sure if you already have it tho ;)
as for the break, in the beginning, its just perfect. nothing to complain abt.
and btw, if you would have any spare time, could you review my remix? :)
thanks in advance!
and gl on finishing bro.