Too basic with not much melody.
The main problem with this track is the simplicity of the drums. Anyone can tell they are just sort of off the shelf. Your use of them isnt that bad... maybe repetitive. It needs some stand out melody... something to contrast the drums and get a flow going.
Id recommend practicing with different drum samples and getting some melody loops down. Maybe try a slower bpm as well.
Its a good start. Distictly jungle.
Note: Dont listen to people like Evoluti9nx3, unconstructive critisism gets people nowhere.
u prob used the 4 beat teplate and drumsyth live... HORRIBLY, this is the worst crap peice of shit ever,sry,work on it,use diff things, go check out my music as an exaple
Used rebirth with two basses not drumsynth live. Thanks for your rewiev anyway.