First of all the piano is immensely repetetive, like, very repetetive that a person couldn't stand it.
Then, the technicalities, the piano itself is wayy too loud and overpowers the rest of the stuff in the beginning, and also, mixing much? I would suggest decreasing the bass and middle, adding some reverb, and then adding a delay effect with the delay at 0.5 seconds, then lower the volume and add a stereo enhancer.
Then the lead, the lead itself isn't bad cuz it IS house-y but it would stand to be decreased from the volume a little too.
Then the melody, I can't say melodieS because there's oly one in each instrument/synth, I would suggest adding some more melodies to keep interesting and bounce-y, so to speak.
The drums, not bad but very generic, so they need work too.
All in all, not bad, just needs a lot of work, but keep building on it, the idea's there.
And also, I'm trying to HELP, so don't answer me arrogantly just cuz you don't agree with me, this is MY input, and not anyone else's.
PM me if you build on this...
THANK YOU (for your review!)
its really helpful.
But i think i won't work on it.
But thanks !