Not nearly enough high freq.
The "chorus" if thats what you'd call it, was actually very boring. You did all the tight snare rolls in the lead up, and then it just drops inot this sort of bridge, an anticlimax. Nothing really happens after the snare rolls. You need to bring out the higher frequencies more, and seperate the lower and mid frequencies, cause at the moment the whole song just kind of sounds smooshed together... theres no clear differentiation between the high supersaw synth and the mid range backer. The melodies and drums are great, though.