This is great.
I don't know why people had a problem with the intro, I thought it was very fitting. This is meant to be movie music, like, not a main theme I'm assuming. If it was played in a 'tense' scene, it would work nearly perfectly. The eerie low brass in the background moves the piece quite nicely. The end was lacking a climax, but then again I am hearing this out of its intended context (a movie). Around 1:37 when the oboe or whatever instrument that is comes in, it becomes really TOO quiet, and like I said there is no real climax and the ending is a bit short and dull. The only part I would fix, aside from that it's excellent.
i didnt particularly like the intro, which is always important in a piece. i dont know, but i dont think it ever really got, ummm, whats the word im looking for, i dont know... loud? maybe thats it, it never had like a climax or anything, it just stayed at one volume. the ending wasnt to good either. o well, better luck next time.
Well other than the beginning it sounded alright. Kind of cookie-cutter sounding stuff but good. It did sound a bit synthesized but I know you don't have a whole orchestra at your disposal. Oh, my problem with the beginning was just that rising string played at 00:14. Sounds a little odd like that. Maybe it should fall?