Singing is rough
to be honest at many points it hurt to hear you sing. But to be honest, I would LOVE the sound of your voice if only it was on tune and proper breathing was used. But truly I think you have potential! have you considered vocal lessons? please try it out! I'd love to hear more and to see you improve!
Would you mind pointing out which points my voice was really off? It helps when I can hear my self being off and correct.
I've considered vocal lessons, but I have never had them. Nor do I have the money, or know where you'd even find that sort of thing. XD