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Something I'm thinking working on...still needs lots of work..but fun anyway


Good work!

Really nice what you did here, but I see a few problems. First, the song was way too repetitive at the beginning of the song, and second, the fade out at the ending was pretty good, but it could still use a little more work. Other than that, all of the instruments were amazing! Loved the guitar and the drums at 00:42. Overall, great job as always!

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

I hate these old things. My equipment was shit. haha.


I like it a little less than the previous ones cuz of the guitar that sounds too "strong" at 0:10 : it overpasses the rest and I think it spoils the song a lil.
What's more, it sounds a lil repeatitive until 0:42.
4/5 9/10 though

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks very much for the reviews, man. Sorry for the late responses again. :(

Please listen to my new stuff ;)

I believe the word to use is \m/

Nice, mean thrashing tune you got here man, this'll really benefit from vocals. I also like the modesty with which you display your skills, you're obviously capable of doing a 32ths solo for 3 mins straight but you dose the "show-off parts" really well, kudos.

Three things to gain more grooviness:
- The lead in the intro is a little bit off sometimes, especially in some of the licks.
- Overall I think the drums overpower the guitars a bit in volume, the latter could use a 3dB or so boost.
- I'd have liked the transcend in that oriental clean guitar at the end to be either more sudden or more gradual, it seemed a little sloppy.

I hope to see the final version soon! Eat teh faif :)

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ya needs more work hehe..

seems to lack stuff.. hope you finish this - or.. "finished" it..

when i move out of this "quiet" house im gonna buy me a leftie guitar and make some guitar tunes :P


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Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Lefty, haha.thanks again dude!\m/

Cool Shiznit!

Makes me feel like i'm trapped in a small space. but in a good way.

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Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

shit dude, I didnt realize you went through all my old shit. Hope you like the evolution!\m/

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3.50 / 5.00

Dec 2, 2005
6:11 PM EST
Heavy Metal
File Info
1.2 MB
1 min 28 sec

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