I would love it for the riffs alone. I also like the little 'orchestral' kind of parts. Remind me of FF or something. Got a nice snap to the kick too :D
Can't comment on the low frequencies as I am on a laptop. Still sounds quite nice n chunky tho. I'll have a listen on my monitors when I get a chance.
Your A Guitarist, aren't you?
Another classic example of good works that need mastering. If you increase the levels of the lower frequencies, and get rid of that terrible hammer clang, it would improve the quality of the piece greatly. Also, the entire song sounds hollow, as if its missing the entirety of the bottom frequencies.