I swear I heard this before....
Wait.. I did. I think I reviewed the earlier version..
I think you should remove the older version.. having two (almost identical) songs doesn't really do much..
So, on to the review.
I think the double bass part helps this song a lot.. Can really hear the emotion now..
This song still lacks certain melodies, I think adding a melody or two would help..
And honestly, I think its the violin sample that isn't that good, you should just switch it completely.. Maybe to a high pitched saw synth? They sound similar.. o.o
Still, most of the stuff from last review remains in this one, still a pretty good job on this..
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.