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Unforgiven Sins

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Author Comments

The Final Output. I edited some parts and I finished it in the afternoon.


I Forgive You

Hi gastrvonll,

I don't really know, the song sounded really flat, to be quite honest. The drums are really quiet. At first listen, I didn't really know where to put this song, it was so different to much of what I'd listened to before. It just lacks a certain exciting quality.

For some reason I found this hard to listen to. It might be good for the background of a game, though, but I found it almost unbearable to listen to.

There are a lot of nice chord progressions played in here though, I like the way you are experimenting. And I'm wondering about the drums: is it really supposed to be like that?

This is very unique, but I don't think people will have that 'wow' factor when they listen to it, either in a game or for personal pleasure. It just seems a little tedious and repetitive.

To be honest: I found this song terrifyingly boring. Good music, but just boring. I'm sorry to say this. I wondered if I still needed to post this review because I thought I might be being harsh, but it just seemed so. I think I'll listen to some of your other songs to see if they're better. Thanks for letting me listen!

--Production-- = 5/10
--Listenability-- = 0/10
--Genius-- = 7/10
--Flair-- = 4/10
--Tilt-- = 2/10
Overall Score: 3.6/10
Rounded Score: 4/10

Verdict: Needs Improvement!


gastarvonII responds:

I'll try to improve my works so I'll do my best! And thanks again for listening! :)

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Credits & Info


2.74 / 5.00

Nov 13, 2010
1:42 AM EST
File Info
3.6 MB
3 min 54 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.