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Dream Trance - Waiting for you

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It's another dream trance song. Made by me of course, a little shorter than I like but that's ok. I like it personally, but I hope you like it too! Let me know what you think.

http://www.youtube.com/us er/xxxCHANCExxx


nice start

but could be far better, the beginning is ok but too long, with some work, less repetitive parts and mord depth on this you can kick up this song far above

ZachPayne responds:

I agree, that's why I'm remaking this song completely and it;s going on my new album. :)


Nice, but give some sounds especially ,the slap like ones less of an edge. Those are annoying to me on almost all music. Everything else is good.

ZachPayne responds:

Okay will keep that in mind ;p

Pretty good.

Interesting song, I like it, though it sounds a little too aggresive for Dream Trance if that's what you're trying to make with this song. But good work none the less. I liked your piano melodies.

- Zerest

ZachPayne responds:

Thanks you for the criticism :D

A little more atmosphere, please?

I thought it was a great song, but personally I don't think the pads were "prevalent" enough to work with the piano and form a dream-like progression.

A little more work could have been done with the drums and clapping, making the drum roll sound a bit more subtle, kinda like the hi-hat roll you had going on at the end.

Overall, I just didn't think it met some of the requirements of a breath-taking dream trance song. I believe a few modifications could be made to make it sound more "dream-like" though.

ZachPayne responds:

Thanks for the suggestions, they were really helpful!

Totally unrelated and completely offtopic.

One thing what I wonder about Newgrounds:
Why do pretty much everyone split the links in their comments?

If links were restricted, 98% of all links would be missing the vital part. (like *** /page instead of www.site.com/page)
Splitting the link after the gTLD just fools away search engines, nothing else.

This is nothing personal, not menant to hate or bash or anything. Just came in mind. :D

ZachPayne responds:

Uhh I tried to get the link not to split but newgrounds just does it anyway lol. So idk. I hope you liked the song though =p.

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Credits & Info


4.39 / 5.00

Nov 12, 2010
1:23 AM EST
File Info
4.2 MB
3 min 40 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.