but could be far better, the beginning is ok but too long, with some work, less repetitive parts and mord depth on this you can kick up this song far above
I agree, that's why I'm remaking this song completely and it;s going on my new album. :)
Nice, but give some sounds especially ,the slap like ones less of an edge. Those are annoying to me on almost all music. Everything else is good.
Okay will keep that in mind ;p
Interesting song, I like it, though it sounds a little too aggresive for Dream Trance if that's what you're trying to make with this song. But good work none the less. I liked your piano melodies.
Thanks you for the criticism :D
A little more atmosphere, please?
I thought it was a great song, but personally I don't think the pads were "prevalent" enough to work with the piano and form a dream-like progression.
A little more work could have been done with the drums and clapping, making the drum roll sound a bit more subtle, kinda like the hi-hat roll you had going on at the end.
Overall, I just didn't think it met some of the requirements of a breath-taking dream trance song. I believe a few modifications could be made to make it sound more "dream-like" though.
Thanks for the suggestions, they were really helpful!
Totally unrelated and completely offtopic.
One thing what I wonder about Newgrounds:
Why do pretty much everyone split the links in their comments?
If links were restricted, 98% of all links would be missing the vital part. (like *** /page instead of www.site.com/page)
Splitting the link after the gTLD just fools away search engines, nothing else.
This is nothing personal, not menant to hate or bash or anything. Just came in mind. :D
Uhh I tried to get the link not to split but newgrounds just does it anyway lol. So idk. I hope you liked the song though =p.