well, i gotta get my hw done, lol.
well, it was a cool song. i liked the sweet "melody", although it was just like 2 notes going at it, but i dont really like the part where they sound so "crunched" together, i know you know what i mean, but ya, its still a sweet song. just maybe add some more melodies or something, the drums are fine IMO though. check out my stuff lolz.
Thanks for the review....but you reviewed an old song of mine, i have improved a bit. Please head on back there and check out my newest. (Thermal Decision) and maybe entropycal.
This is a very interesting piece. I love the beginning. The harmonizing melody was fantastic. But then the melody disappears, and i was left with the same two notes over and over. lol. You could definitely add more to that. Your clap synth sounds a bit lame, like all FL claps do. I suggest going and importing a wav clap from the net into your song, it would help alot. Guitar synth??? Hmmm....I think a better lead could be used, but it was very different, which is often times good. Work on a little more variety/diversity in your lead synth throughout. And MORE MELODY! Good work, and don't forget to check out my stuff that is actually ANY good.
DJ Enthalpy -.-\\
Well, for my remarks about the song: Is it says in the song, its still incomplete (embarrasingly enough for me, ive been grounded from making music, and i cant work on it till then)...lol..But, besides the fact, i should be able to afford a synth soon, and im gonna start makin better stuff. Your stuff seemed a little repetitive: if ur gonna have a repetitive song, u want a beat going. also, they need to go somewhere. My friend and i did this remix of Shivers by armin van buuren, but the only reason we could do a good job was because of the samples that we could work with.
Like ur stuff, wanna know if:
#1: Wut program do you use
#2: r u still 16; if ur 17, then we share much in common ;)
#3: would u be interested in maybe partnering up
-i dont have a leble yet, but expect one soon...
DJ Lightning @ www.soundclick.com/djjohnnylightning
Um!? How could I help you?
I love techno music but I'm not really good at making them. I still a newbie at making songs!^_^ Well see...Let me examine this song more... Hmm... man...(sigh)...I really want to help you! It's just... well e-mail me at Viewtiful_masta@yahoo.com. I'll talk to you more there. PROMISE!-_O I'm just not sure right now on how I could help you! let me think first. So e-mail please! I answer to my e-mails in a jiff!
alrighty then..u can email me @ firstname.lastname@example.org ty
Now this song had some Viewtiful synth's!=P The that elec guitar was freakin V! YEA! Man you rock like a PRO! The drums and the clap were V MAN! Your heading for a Viewtiful road! ^_^
do you think u can maybe help me finish this song? I'm struggling with what to do next...i still need to add some fx to the guitar, and i really would like to make a more interesting intro, unlike this boring one starting with just a beat and beeps... but thank you.