i need to add a summary
hmm, im trying to give you a usefull review here if you dont mind.
the first thing that actually hits me as a 'depression' is the kick,
it isnt really great, the sounds doesnt go with it by my feeling, doesnt flow.
it could use more of a bass instead of a punch.
in other words; your kicks laggs bass.
up to my headphone *put on the headphone*
ok, the first thing i do hear is a good low bass, well done mate!
the minus point about it is that it sounds a little bit like a square, maybe it could be deeper since you introduce a piano piece further in the song.
im now flowing into your wonderfull pad, this is really good, i get the feeling i can fight the world now!
suddenly it stops, too bad it aint longer then it is xD
ok the last bits, upon to the cymbals/percs ect, they seem to be pretty standard if you would ask me, try to add some EQ's or filters/reverb, maybe some delay on some of them just to get a bit of a flow.
well, i hope my review isnt too bad, i tryed my best to explain what i could be better in my opinion.
please pm me when youve finished it :)
idl ike to hear what you will do with it.
actually, this review is pretty useful :D
If there's one thing I can guarentee anybody in my WIP's, is that it's gonna be rough, :D
However what you can hear, is what the song when it is fully finished is gonna include. Same outline you know
This is actually the first time I've used my own sounds.
I created them with 3xOsc, made the pad, and the pluck (the lead with the square tone).
Thanks again for the review, I'll take your advice to consideration when I get around to this again :)