I don't see what's wrong, it seems like a good song
I gave it a 5 to equalize the score :)
Lol, been a while since I looked at this one. Suprised anyone still looks at this old stuff. Thanks, but looking back on it I do see a lot I could have done better. Maybe since you liked it I'll go back and redo it.
Here's my take on it.
I think that your main melody didn't flow well (as in the notes just hurt the ears). Also the melody doesn't seem to flow unless the beats with it. The kicks should stay consistent and the cymbals are too loud and seem to drown out other parts. The ending of the song with the eurogate would be solid to have throughout the song, and that flows better overall. 6/10 3/5
how about you stick to the beat, and dont use too many sounds. edit the sounds too, so it doesent look like you are just taking it from somewhere.
That's almost exactly what the other guy said. Maybe when I get the full program I'll do a re-edit. Thanks for the advice, I need all I can get.
the only thing I can suggest you is to not change the beat. Mabye the sound for the melody isn't the best. And it is a bit monotone.
Thank! I've been waiting for someone to finally give me some advice, since I've had no idea what is wrong!!!