Since you so kindly reviewed one of my tracks...
First of all, straight off the bat, TUNE YOUR KICK DRUM! What is it with amateurs and picking random un-tuned kick drum samples.
Secondly how about you equalise that lead sound you have, it's clashing with your other mid frequencies making it so you cant hear it very well.
Thirdly, I don't know what you were thinking with that interlude bit? I mean, by itself it sounds pretty good but it didn't match the song at all? It sounded like it was written in a different scale, it didn't fit the previous part of the song melodically or rhythmically.
And lastly, don't be lazy and re-use verses and choruses, yes I heard it at the end. We already heard the start AT THE START, we don't want to hear it again at the end, take something away from it or add something to it to keep it interesting, maybe a counter-melody?
1: The kick drum is tuned and tuned the way I like it. Although, I think it goes out of key for just a bit in one of the parts. Trust me, I went through about 150 samples before I found that one, then it got transposed, pitch corrected, EQ'd and filtered.
2: The lead sound is just plain loud in general ans does need to be fixed.
3. If you'll notice, the whole song changes key several times. It's stupid, but I knew I was doing it. And if you listen to anything other than techno you'll find that repeating rhythms and melodies is actually quite normal (unless you're Dragonforce or a grindcore band). I composed rock/metal for a few years before I got into techno, so most of my songs are built like a rock song. In fact, I'm having my buddy who's a metal vocalist do up some vox for this track. That's part of the reason why this is such a short song, or at least compared to things like my Japalapo track, which is about 32 minutes long.
But thanks for the constructive criticism and not "ZOMG U GAVE ME A BAD REVIEW THEREFORE YOUR SONG IS DOGSHIT!!!!11"
I give props
Nasty,Crunchy,Dirty,bass blasted i give you credit for taking the time to make it but im not a fan of the sound and overall mindset it puts me in
kick kick kick the base!