I like the tunes you put into this song, they kind of fit.
Just that you used a (rather) common chord progression, I don't recommend you emphasize it, rather, work on letting your melodies do the work.
This song could do better mixing, certain instruments' volumes are too off.
And the pads at the beginning could sound more stereo. Try duplicating that channel, pan each one to the far left and right, and detune one side ever so slightly. Insta-stereo effect. =)
Still, great song. This song can be improved a lot by better mixing.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.