It is strange, and I can hear the trance part of it. There are some parts that are just odd, not necessarily a bad thing. It isn't bad that's for sure. I feel you could have put something in to make it sound...fuller? Maybe a little more to it is all I'm asking haha. But good job!
I know what you mean about making it sound fuller. I have yet to make a song I am completely happy with but I guess it will just happen over time. As long as I feel I am getting better, that is the main thing I am focused on. Thank you for the review.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.