Meh.

This wasn't bad, but it was kind of slow and focused on the chords too much. It had no melody and that really killed it.

It would make nice, quiet background music for something though. As a standalone song? It's a bit of a letdown.

Nice composure though! Blended smoothly and presented a good overall feel. I did notice a couple of heavily influenced sections of it that really rung a bell, but I can't think of what it sounded like it was from.