It all ended
I was enjoying the melody so much while working, then, the ending spoiled it all.
I don't intend to be rude, I supposed you added it to give a slight tecnho feeling or something, or maybe it was just a mistake, yes, I think it was a mistake and you were too lazy to replay the whole piece
This was a complete freestyle, just went on the piano and played :D so couldn't of played again, or i could of looped it. Thanks a lot though ;)
I can feel some expression in this song. It does convey some form of sadness. I just find the piano did not become too dramatic. Make use of the piano's wide dynamic range and pitch! Utilize it to add drama to your piece, like pressing loud, low notes at really sad parts, or the twinkly highs for special effects.
The playing wasn't consistent though, I can tell you your playing isn't totally refined. I think this is related to the rather fast tempo you used. This would sound much better if it were slower, much more emotions will go through.
Overall, i like this song. Great piano solo.
This was a freestyle piece, basically played the piano as I went. If i was to actually compose a piece it would have these elements. Thanks a lot :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.