That was cool!!
Flow was great and awesome vibe, and I like the effects you put in the mix too :D
The backing track was pretty sick too, did you make it yourself?
I think I can relate a bit with what your rapping about too! xD
Nice track it's a 5/5 for my :D
Thanks man, appreciate the review! Everything you hear is 100% by me.
well done :)
yu did really well with this; i like the use of multi-tracking it emphasises just the right words at the right time. i like the beat too; it works really well, i actually like the accent yur voice sounds much more direct which works good with this sort of song; i really enjoyed it. :) it does feel like yu held back in a few bits hence why i gave an 8 but if it wasn't for that yu'd get a 10/10.
Thanks heaps for the great review, constructive criticism is always appreciated :) Look out for the Black Ops song coming soon ;)
Get that accent out of my ears! I want to go hunting now. Ya know riding horses and doxins running after rabbits and shit. Speaking of shit..COD is shit! Gears and beers!! Wheres the booze at??!!! Beat is alright, but not sick as fuck by any means. Btw you rhymes dont seem forced this time, they seem withheld. Wheres the booze at!!?!! 5/5
Wow.. you seem to be pretty worked up about one review I give out. Firstly, this song was made by me via a request form about 30 different people; secondly, if COD was shit, it wouldn't be the most loved game in the world at the moment. Thirdly, my voice is withheld, because I didn't rap in this song, I practically talked, but wasn't bothered to re-record a full and proper version as of yet. However, thank you for your honest opinion. (even if it is majorly affected by the fact that JayWeed is your friend and you're trying to get back at me.)
Ya got a steady flow and some creative lyricism. There is a lot of energy in your flow, but the tone and emphasis sounds flat. The adlibs and overdubs are good, adds some punch to it. Im not much a fan of the beat, whistle sound = bleh; but the keys a slick.
Nice work, Wheres the Black Ops Remix?
Yeah, thank you, constructive criticism is always appreciated. :)
I wasn't too happy with how I recorded this song, as I didn't put any effort into my voice, I just talked really... but I didn't feel up to re-recording it, so i just chucked it up here.
And Black Ops Remix is on my to-do list :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.