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Well, Its been 3 days since i started making my own songs, i loved it! Here goes my first work.
I started it because of the awesome songs in the audio portal, i was inspired by many artists like Bjra, Nightkilla, Bounc3, AxeFX and many others (Sorry if i didn't say your name xD)
I want good, constructive ones! Not the ones that say "Good" or "This sucks" kinda reviews, but reviews that say why you like it and why you don't like it.
Its a real simple loop, still got to train to make real good songs.
Enjoy it.

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The beat is great and the sound is very pleasing to the ear...except for the sharps and flats, they make t seem like the song is going to take a big turn from that section, but then stays on track, so it might just be me, but I think this kind of messes with my ears a bit...

NuNoPT responds:

The main instrument is kinda pleasing to the ear, but it has great differences, so its hard to make it non-repetitive, as stated below i messed up the song too much, so i kinda failed when changing, anyways not gonna post anything soon, since im still practicing with Fl studio, and i got school and a lot of work.
Thanks for your review.


As previously addressed.

Sound: The tone is good, the actual sound IS pleasing to the ear.
Structure: Okay, you don't want to change the music this often, you want to stick to a time signature, 4/4 3/4 ect. While you are listening to music your brain is subconsciously counting the whole time. What you want is a pattern, not necessarily a repeating one, but a pattern that the brain can process, this seems a bit hap-hazard. Lemme know if this makes any sense to you, this is REALLY hard to explain...

NuNoPT responds:

Well, i know its kinda bland, but im still trying out other instruments.
I still need to train alot more, anyway im glad you wasted some of your time to review and that u somewhat enjoyed it. The main instrument itself is a little hazardous, had alot of trouble just making a good rhythm.


Good potential, but kinda bland

Not bad for a first but I think it has much much more potential for expansion. It's a bit basic, but that's normal for first times. Try adding other instruments and different patterns and you got yourself a song. Definitely has need for bass at least

NuNoPT responds:

Im trying out other instruments but i need to get some sense of rhythm, i wasn't very good with the bass so it kinda sucked more with it. It's the best i could do with 3 days of having FL Studio, and in my opinion im really really happy.
Glad u had the time to review it.


It's very unstructured.

The sound is fun but it keeps seeming to go in a certain direction and then changes, leaving the listener lost and confused. The timing and chord structure don't flow very well. I like the actual sound though, so 4/10.

NuNoPT responds:

It's very unstructured since i practiced with the main instrument and i kinda made a tune,i made a tinier loop and then to make go all together it.. didn't go perfectly.
The main instrument itself is pleasing to the ear, but then its hard to make transitions to make a big song.
Glad you could review it.


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Nov 1, 2010
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