I rated this a 5/10 because there are a lot of people that can do better, but there is also a lot of people who can, and do, do a lot worse. The beat in you song is fine, and it has potential to be a lot better than it is, so I suggest to just work on it and improve it. I think that the notes start a bit too early and/or end too late, so just try to make minor changes and see how it sounds...Good luck!
y would u make us suffer like this.. terrible.
I'm sorry, don't you have more crap music to work on? It's obvious you just wrote this because I slammed your "song".