I agree with trash man...
this could be better...the sound that starts at 0:13 is hurting my ears through the whole song, maybe you should work on that synth, its repetitive, loud and weird. Anyway the second part of the song (1:30-end) was an improvement and sounded more hallowenish
Thanks! :D I know its 2 loud but it was when i put it in Fl studio to export it as a Mp3 file the sound was turned up a bit but i just tought " you just have to put down the volume on you headset :P Sorry if it hurted you hears that was not intended ^^
hey thanks for the review.
I appreciate the review you gave me. I will however say about your song, try to watch the leveling of the sounds. Also the beginning i would suggest to add some other element. I know you were trying to do the build effect but i think you should have given your listeners something so we know where it is headed. Some people may write it off before it starts. I like some of the sounds you put on here in the middle on it was decent. i enjoyed the ending and middle.
Yeah the volume was turned up when i was gonna export it as a mp3 file :P Thanks for the usefull tips you gave me i will try to make my next song better! :D
It's nice but..
Sadly it misses the Halloween feel.
Good try, but I feel you either need to make a noticeable melody, or just start over if you want it to be Halloween music. Also, some of the sounds were kinda loud and seemed overused. If you want these kinds of sounds to sound good, you gotta vary it up more, and also try not to be as penetrating in all of the percussion.
Sorry if this isn't the review you wanted, but I believe in being honest in my reviews.
Thank you :) This is acctualy the kind of reviews that i want :D i wanna know what i do wrong so i can fix it to my next song ^^ good review! :)