This is wacky
This is pretty damn wacky. I'm not sure if your intention was to make it sound so dirty, but with the violin, I think it needs to be a bit more presence. I think it could use a bit more than just a percussion line; that gets a bit old and uninteresting.
The percussion's kinda crushed a bit, which I liked, but unfortunately, it is so repetitive, I feel that the innovation achieved from the beginning is lost at the middle to the end. Perhaps if you changed the rhythm up or maybe arrange it so that it "trips" the listener, you'll be able to add more dynamics to this track.
I was thinking that you could probably fit in a bit more of a shrill violin part. I just thought it'll add to the wackiness in a good way.
I can see this track improve, so keep it up.
If you don't mind, constructive criticism for my tracks are appreciated too :D
Thanks for the Ideas! I think you might be . I wasn't completely satisfied with the quality of this work, but I did love how the beggining worked together more smoothly. I'll make sure to check out your work too.