This is nice!
The intro was a very nice beginning to the track. I'm amazed at how you introduced the bassline with the piano. I thought it would clash, but I was surprised that it combined so well.
On the other hand, the percussion seems a bit too weak. Your claps and kicks are barely audible, so I suggest layering more claps and kicks to strengthen them. Your reverse crash could also use a bit more work, near the higher end.
Lastly, I'm very disappointed because of the length; I hope you'll finish the track soon because I can't wait to listen to the finished track.
If I could have a moment of your time, I'd appreciate it if you could take a listen to my tracks and give them a review. Thanks :D
Alright thanks bro. I'll make sure to work on the percussion and I can see what you mean on the reverse crash. Anyways, I'll try to remember to send you a message when I post up the full version.. (:
Lastly, thanks for the review! :D
Oh and I'll make sure to check out your music ASAP.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.