It kinda feels like 2 songs...
I think it may need some work babe. The ending sort of sounds like an abrupt, or hmm... kind of like the transition that it makes feels as if the song is transitioning to another song rather than back to the beginning. I think I may like how the beginning fades in; however, it was confusing at first. I thought there wasn't any sound... haha... but yeah, I think I like it after playing it the second time.
I don't know... It's neat! I mean, it sounds like you mixed two songs... but maybe it should be more fluid?
I really like the beat though. I think it is pretty amazing anyways.
I love you,