dude..
I love this, yes it does have a few problems, I can't really hear the kick all that well meaning it needs more eq'ing. A little overcompressed but you can fix that easily! :)
Lastly, I know your not done but could I remix this please? I just love the melodies! :) If your not using fl studio, sending me the midi's would be nice :)
Let me know if your interested! :)
- XeroQ