Nicely done. But...
It needs some spice. Try introducing a violin, or some other solo instrument.
Holy shit, that is amazing.
That was it. Those five words are all that is nessesary to describe this song. Ordinarily, I'd go and use a good half of the space allowed to ultimately say that, and then have about fifty "but"'s and "however"'s. Not here. My ears detect no error whatsoever.
Love this song, it's great.
Continue the good work
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.