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Oct 29, 2010 | 2:28 AM EDT
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4.8 MB
4 min 10 sec
3.62 / 5.00

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Rated 3.62 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Trance

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Rated 3 / 5 stars


Well the intro needs some work for sure. The riff totally came out of nowhere and to be honest I didn't find it all that musical or catchy. When the main synth finally came in, it sounded super distorted, and not in a good way at all. Sounds like you have some volume issues and the echo didn't really seem to fit it at all. The bass line was okay but didn't seem to flow with the main synth melody all that well. The drums weren't terrible, but didn't really impress me either.

The rest of the song was the same. Not much changed really and it didn't really contain anything I liked in particular. Phased anything to me just sounds cliche, but that distorted main synth really did it for me. It didn't sound precise and beautiful at all, which is usually what trance synths sound like. The whole song sounds like it totally flew right past the mixer board and to Newgrounds to me. The ending was appropriate though, and the cymbal rides worked well. It just to me had a very messy and unorganized feel like not much effort was put into this.


StaticKatana responds:

Really, I agree with what you said, I definitly need to work harder with the songs I make. Right now I wish I put more effort into this...


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not my cup of proverbial tea

The intro I felt, needed to be a lot more subtle, I mean I just seemed to appear, and was really at odds with where the song went next, I mean, It was a decent piece, but the phasing was a little harsh on my ears.

The next part of the song was much more like it, however the lead line seemed to be out of time with the bass, that is until the drums kicked in, but I felt that they overpowered the actual lead line, which I s a shame, as the lead line on it's own would have made the song build up very very nicely.

The change im beat did very little for me, I can tell you were trying to make things a little more interesting, but It didn't really work, and the song simply descended into the tintro again, which I feel kind of negates that piece being the into.

The bridge worked rather well actually, It was simple, and built back up into the song rather nicely, I also feel that it worked well as the ending.

To be honest, I felt it was too long

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