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"My Own"

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Was INCREDIBLY bored today. So I decided to make a song out of some vocals from Bioshock. Here are the lyrics:

Imagine the will, it took to create a place like this,
and what have you built?
You're just a termite at the side.
...You're not a man.
Breath deep,
so later you might remember the taste.
I came to this place to build the impossible.

I cannot believe how much things have changed.
There are no innocents; there are heroes, and there are criminals.

There artist swims in a lake of pain,
sometimes he evolves into something magnificent,
sometimes he drowns.

I personally believe this is my best song yet. Feedback greatly appreciated:)

Thanks guys!



very good!

i really liked it!
you just gotta work on velocity distribution between tracks and thats about it.
maybe pump up those drums. find the right stuff to do it.
i have faith you can make some pretty great stuff if you just do the minor tweaking!
the minor stuff effects it in the long run!
keep treking, bro, you'll get it it right!
i really like it tho!

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montehawks responds:

thanks so much! (i just noticed your review)

however this song is long gone... i've since updated to a new computer and the company i chose to backup my data failed in listening when i said "for the love of god save all of my FL STUDIO files!!!"

i may have the vocals lying around somewhere tho... hmmm

could not hear the drums

epic awesomeness aside, i could not hear the drums. and i really wanted to :(

montehawks responds:

Maybe a future update or 'remake' of this song will include stronger drums :D

Thank you for the review:)

the sample makes this pretty fucking epic, mang

good stuff, I like that repeating synth pattern too, dont ever stop making music, you must build the IMPOSSIBLE

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montehawks responds:

Haha, thank you so much:)

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Credits & Info


4.42 / 5.00

Oct 28, 2010
10:57 PM EDT
File Info
5.9 MB
3 min 13 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.