This has potential

First off i love how your songs stay on a one note bassline then change into a 4 note bassline.. That always gets me xD The lead that starts at :53 Sounds perfect! But just like the other guy said... It needs more bass.. I was thinking change the bass that starts at :14 to a more trance-y bass.. do you know what i mean? instead of like a "dong" sound.. That would make this song really really good! I think you should come back to this song and finish it up! It sounds really good man! Keep it up!
~Jason

KEEP UP

on 43 it was cool but you should put more bass NICE MAN