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Oct 28, 2010 | 4:36 PM EDT
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3.5 MB
3 min 50 sec
4.29 / 5.00

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Rated 4.29 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

i've worked harder on this than any other song and im proud of what came out, please listen to all of it before voting



Rated 4 / 5 stars

interesting sound

not a bad sound, just interesting. Some of it, kinda reminds me of power rangers, lol. Mainly the intro until about :58. A decent mix, but still has room for improvement.


Rated 3 / 5 stars


Well most of the song is musically okay, but I think we have some serious volume issues with the instruments. The word 'weak' comes to mind. Nothing about this song strikes me at all really. It all blends into a quiet weak sense of urgency. The ending was rather interesting, and I like what you did there with the main melody. It sounded much like the beginning only a bit better even.

The drums throughout the entire piece sound very weak. The synth and bass line in the background do an okay job of carrying the melody pretty well but to me the bass line especially sounds out of place. It's just this really low grungy noise and feels out of place with the main synth melody. While this is going on the drums sound as if they're playing something intense but we can barely hear them. The piano was definitely a nice touch though, and I like the melody that it played quite a bit. The ending is what made the song for me.

joethesouleater responds:

i waited until i could redo it to respond, how does the mix sound now, i've updated it and hopefully i've fixed the issues and didnt create new ones lol


Rated 3 / 5 stars


Right, well the name of this track gave me some sort of indication of what you were trying to acheive, the chords at the start gave a real sense that the song was leading into something, particularly with the beat coming in, and the guitar in the background.

However, the background is this tracks Achile's heel in some places, when the palm muting comes in, it sounds fantastic, and gives a real sense or urgerncy, however the guitar in the background showcases just how tinny and small it sounds.

The bridge is fantastic though, the use of a delay really accentuates those notes, and has the impession of making the track sound faster than it really is.

Unfortunately, It then goes back to th chorus, and my real problem with this, is that the part taking the front sounds rather weak, and to cope with this, I'm guessing you made the drums as quiet as they sound, I really think the track could be improved somewhat my making the drums louder, and making the main line sound somewhat beefier, i.e. use a more powerful pickup.

I think the ending is fantastic, It uses a version of the intro, but ti's modified in a wonderful way, as it uses the techniques shown throughout the song.

Fix the lead line, and this could be great.

~Review request club~

joethesouleater responds:

thanks, i really apreciate the review, i did have some problems with the mix, thanks for the advice. i often go back and fix my songs after i havent heard them in a while


Rated 4 / 5 stars


It was nice, kind of weird chords at some points. Im sure you were trying to achieve that effect though. It was pretty goo tho! Ill rate you 5! I came here from audio advertisements in forums by the way. Please listen to something of mine too.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

i love this one

Youve med a briliant piece here. I Love the sound, but its more Pop than rock.... or metal.. but however i like it very much. this is as it feels like, really your type of music. more of this stuff wouldnt hurt :) go for it

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