Like nameless said, some of the notes and what not need work. You need to get more creative with the melodies and they came across as kind of weak. Despite this, the song was a very enjoyable little ditty and much respect to the classic techno sound. Also, the ending seemed very lacking. Keep it up!
Sounds need work
Ideas are very good but that fl studio sample you use dosent fit at all really, you know the one, at the beginning. The melodies are good note-wise but all your sounds just need to be fatter and pop more to the listener, try to make your own sounds out of the presets rather than using them by messing with those knobs. Soundgoodizer and reverb effects can be good addons too, but EQ is something you need to learn to do as well. A good try, just needs more time like all good music. Dont give up!