It has a nice color to it. Good concepts, however maybe make them each a little more different next time, not necessarily in speed, but even in tambre. as for revenge, it could have had a longer time with an even bigger, more dramatic crescendo. In my opinion. Melodically beautiful and deep. Redemption was powerful and moving. If I would put it the way it sounded though, I would put:
Loss or Sorrow, Redemption ,Plot to Revenge. (Due to lack of crescendo).