It has a nice color to it. Good concepts, however maybe make them each a little more different next time, not necessarily in speed, but even in tambre. as for revenge, it could have had a longer time with an even bigger, more dramatic crescendo. In my opinion. Melodically beautiful and deep. Redemption was powerful and moving. If I would put it the way it sounded though, I would put:
Loss or Sorrow, Redemption ,Plot to Revenge. (Due to lack of crescendo).
I definitely agree with you on that title you made up, it's better than mine ,that's for sure, but I made that title up in like 10 seconds lol
I may even change the title in the future and as for the crescendos i didn't have the time to make this with such dynamic effects and such but I dont have such a great audio creator anymore but do you know any I can use?
I would pay $14.95 for a CD if this song were on it! It's realaxing, and man the world needs more relaxation.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.