HOWAREYOU? TODAY SON?
aaj em an amerikaantje en aaj laajk toe seej tet joor mjoesik is auwsoom!!!!
I'd start the song with a different drum. Perhaps a cool soundeffect, but not just some drums. When the kick comes in it's very static, until the bells come in, which sound just the same as 'Smalltown Boy' from Bronski Beat. But when the pad comes in it sounds just awesome. Later on, the refrain, sounds just wonderfull! That simple but powerfull little sound finishes it off.
And now, finsh it it goddamnit.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.