could be better!
its got potential. ok the synth thing at :32 is just bleh. either get rid of it or make it sound better. hmm if you could maybe slow down the entire song just a little bit. especially 1:03 the epic trumpet part or w/e it is. i dont really like your drums either. they are too loud i think. maybe lower the volume down on them. i like it but needs to be redone! :]
I dont think it works.
First couple seconds sounds like it has a chance then it goes to a mix of modern and retro that doesnt work. I think its to slow and the horns and stuff at 1:11 really kill it. When your trying to make a song like this you cant just add in sounds like the fail guitar at 2:55, it happend earlier in the song too but it really doesnt work.
Keep at it though im sure you will get it right with some more tuning