well, not good, but nice try. see some of my stuff maybe?
I think that the melody doesnt sound the best in some parts
I think you have some serious potential and should definetly keep it up
check out some of my stuff too
Your IS COOL TOO!! YAY! =D!!
THX FOR THE INfluENCE!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.