Woah.

Only sad that the drums kind of distract me from the melody because they are so freaking loud, they really got to be toned down.
Plus, those drums kind of don't fit the song, the bass drum does, but the hi-hat and the snare don't, they sound kind of too empty.

So it's ONLY an issue with the drums that I have, but for the rest, the song is REALLY great! That guitar, that is just fucked up man! In the right way! Maybe you could add a little echo to that guitar, to the long notes... I think that could be interesting :) VERY nice composition.

My 10 cents.