first, I don't like long songs because I usually can't focus all the way through it. So, If I say anything about shortining part of a song, you don't have to listen to me. I just like short songs. Also, I wrote the reveiew as if I was shortining it.
OK, for the beginning, I would have made the bass that comes in at :30 come in at like :20 and make the adjustments with everything else to fit it in.
At :53, with the popping sound that is sorta in the background, make it really pop. It's good and all but I feel that it can be more. Just make it explode.
I like what you did with the bass at 1:17. It really gets it going.
1:30 to 1:55 It feels that this is just added to fill in space. I beleave that I could be cut out and still get the what you want out of it.
2:22 to 2:27 The sound that comes in here is very nice and really adds to the drop. but then it fades and it's back to were it was. If you could extend that sound all the way to 2:41, It would be nice and loose it's touch so much. Same here with 3:28. Carry the sound to 3:47.
Personally, I would have ended the song at around 4:10. like take the end that you have for the song and plop it there. but the song continues.
The whistle sound that you have at 4:15 - 5:12, nice touch to the sound. I would carry that sound back to 3:28 to help that out.
I like the ending. I would just leave that alone.
All together, its pritty much the same thing with different twist and all. I can't say that I like it, but at the same point, every time that I here this song, I get into it. Untill I lose focus of the song and start thinking of other things.
solid music, keep it up
It's a really enjoyable song. I like the intro synths, just sound cool. The song is sort of repetitive at times though. There's not really anything catchy for me to remember either. But that's just my opinion! It was a really nice listen! Great job, keep it up!