I like the melody a lot. It's definitely something I wouldn't mind dancing to. The beat is good and you added some variation which is awesome.
The only major thing I would fix is the outro, you need at least a fade out if you are not going to finish it. I'd also suggest on making the bass less harsh and brighten up the lead as that is the most important part of your song. Nice demo overall mate. Come check out my stuff sometime? Thanks.
Very deep Gothic cathedral sound to to it.
I enjoyed it.