Everything could be better.

Everything is just loud in general, except for your kick. You've got everything compressed in a weird way, it makes it all overlap and it just turns into a big ball of wtf.

From the intro:
-Your lead was drowned out by everything, the kick being the biggest overpowering thing
-As mentioned, the kick is louder than everything. That gets changed when the bass comes in and drowns out the whole mix, except for the clap

Your octave variating bass is louder than everything, overall.

TIPS: Turn everything waaaay the hell down. Work with it so that it doesn't sound so cluttered (maybe add some stereo to some synths, etc) and try sticking to the same leads throughout the whole song, because switching leads can be a hassle to the mix.

overall, nice tune with some wobbly mixing. If possible, get someone else to mix and master your songs, that might help since some people have better sound equipment.

Your welcome for being a little bit more helpful than the others :P

-PdG-

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i agree with deathnerd

it almost sounds a little distorted because of the volume level and some tracks you cannot even hear. It is still a great song though. :)

Woww (:

I enjoyed this very much. I like how it focuses on the bass, those kinds of songs are the ones you'll hear from my car when I'm rollin down the street (: Good job.

Cool

What up? not a bad track mang. There are some things I would turn the volume down on. but other than that nice choon.