Wow, freaking great lyrics dude and the backbeat is even sicker here. Would be cool if you posted lyrics though. I can see most being able to understand what is going on like me but some people might have a hard time understanding what is going on here.
The drums are freaking cool with the claps as well. Sounds simple but good. The piano/keyboard is pretty cool and very lightly played here which is good though because this sounds like a harsh rap yet at the same time the piano kind of makes it a bit lighter as well.
The lyrics are pretty twisted though. I can see this going with a music video of someone trying to fight for something or another. Maybe the one they love? I don't know.
Overall, you did a sick and twisted job here, great job and word up!!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.