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Uploaded
Oct 16, 2010 | 11:59 PM EDT
File Info
Song
830.7 KB
22 sec
Score
3.07 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.07 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
480 Plays | 27 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Ambient
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Author Comments

I'm really new to FL Studio and making music and this is actually my first REAL attempt without using a YouTube tutorial and taking beats from there. I got lost really fast as you can see. Please give me feedback on how to continue this.

Reviews


pure5152pure5152

Rated 3 / 5 stars

it was okay

the piano sounded a bit sharp and shrill, though. maybe try adding some reverb and increasing the wetness a little bit. The piano melody got a little repetitive as well, but seeing this is a WIP that's okay xD

also, like HG said, don't use the preset drums. try layering the drums a bit to create a unique type of 'feel' to it. you can do this by having two kick samples in one present and increasing the attack of one while lowering the decay and doing the opposite for the other. The kick was a bit overpowering as well, and stood too much out of the mix.

The mix was also lacking a whole ton of lows and middles, and just felt really dry :\ maybe add a left hand part to the piano?or maybe some string pads.. or something.

it's a good start! keep it up! :)
3/5, 6/10



HappyGuy42HappyGuy42

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Don't use preset drums.

They suck imo.

Also, give variation to the piano. Make it fast paced, as well as the drums, which should get a ton of variation to them within... reasonable standards. That's al I have for the 22 seconds.

Make it DnB. :D