Not bad... Considering I see that you're fairly new in the music business. However, you my friend have some originality going here. Though this is not electronic, I bet you could add a swing to this!
If you wanted to get more into electronic, then you should start with your basic dance loops.
Start out with your kick, hi-hats, claps, etc.
Add your Synths: Plucks, leads, pads, bass, strings, etc.
Play around a bit with notes that sound good when played together! It may take time, and it may look like you're going nowhere, but when you find something that's just right, it can be made a masterpiece.