Meh

I recognize the song and I love it, along with everything about that movie. Unfortunately, though, I believe you somewhat butchered it. Perhaps adding a bass melody or at least some drums or something could make this a little less annoying.

Needs something else

Its sounds alright so far but to really Tranceify it you need a massive bass thwumping throughout.

the base?

gabba needs some sort of base. with a constant loud harsh beat this would ROCK!
also someone claims that u copied it from castle in the sky? just add a hard beat and its good and yours (and gabba)!

my ears are bleeding...

Im sorry...I dont want to be mean or rude and Im sure you where trying, but it need a LOT more...and it was a bit annoying....but keep trying =D Im sure if you keep trying something good will come =3
At least you can make music, if I made something, im sure people will dis on me like this and give me bad ratings.

<3

Umm…

Honestly, this is from Castle in the Sky, and you couldn't have done more to it? Practically nothing has been done to this tune.