It's still a little repetitive. It was composed very well though.
It's pretty nice. Although..
1. The bells need to be leveled out where it doesn't rape the eardrums. I like how you layed them in a battle like formation though.
2. I believe your percussion side of this song could be positioned in a rather more less bland way. You definately have a great piece here, but I feel you rushed this piece a bit. IMO. Like, it's a great sequence of sounds, but the sounds you used, and how you allocated them I couldn't really grasp anything from it.
3. So can you make this song BADASS? ( know you can) ^^. I here alot of spots you can slip a heavy bass pad, or a dissonance pad. I here alot of spots you could play a background bell for the main bell lead. Alternating the percussion positions would really turn this song into some dark castle, dungeon music. ^-^ Add some screams, and spooky sounds even. I believe this is jsut a blueprint to what you really can do. I hope I helped. ^^ 5/5 10/10. I can definately here what you are going for, now put these pieces together, and I believe you got a nice halloween based song.
Thanks alot for the advice! I appreciate the input!
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