I like the groove and it looks like a really good intro for a rock song. I'm a drummer myself, you can improve on the cymbals though. Try not to use the cymbal by itself coz it makes it sound too thin.. like use a higher pitched splash type cymbal along with the snare drum, and use a crash with the base drum.
Thanks for the advice! I'm only a novice when it comes to drums, myself, and I did the drums for this on FL.