Well, I would have to agree that the noise at the beginning and the end is in fact 'wack'. You might want to either change that or remove it completely. The mix is not bad, it's obvious that you put a bit of effort into this and the variety of sounds and melody changes are nice. I would like to add that I don't feel the drums in the song have a very 16 bit sound to them though. You might want to find some different drums to make it have more of a vintage game system sound to it, in my opinion.
Other than that it's not bad, just needs a little touching up I think. Good work though, keep it up.
Yeah, I'm thinking of getting rid of the sound at the beginning.
Thanks for the advice! I will take it into account.
Awesome little mix but
That loud noise at the start and the end is whack :S
That was ment to be funny. Have you ever played a classic Sonic the Hedghog game before?
That loud noise at the begining is supposed to be an overly-dramatic variation on the scratchy "SEGA!" voice at the start of every classic sonic game. The loud noise at the end is tricky; it's the sound of Sonic the Hedgehog dying in the classic games.
Glad you liked the middle, though! :)