I agree with Spark-Man. This is very sellable. The only real gripe I have is production. It doesn't pack enough punch but it easily could if it were mastered a little better.
I'd love to record a vocal track to this.
wow, I just started listening to your work, and I have to say Im impressed. Hell dude, get some crappy vocals and record a CD! I shit you not, this is as good as most of the industrial that I listen to (Einsterzende Neubauten, Skinny Puppy, Throbbing Gristle, Download). you got some talent man!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.