I liked what you were going for In this piece. The one main thing that bugged the daylights out of me, was the cymbal taps at the beginning were mostly on the up-beats in a irregular fashion, namely 00:16-00:52 . It feels off to me due to it being an up beat, but that's just me. I'm not sure if that was what you were going for but I don't think it matters. What I think of what you could do is to give the cymbal tap something more, what that 'more' is unfortunately out of my department. Again the song is fine even without the changes.The song is still very good regardless that I give you 7/10. The song shall earn my respect as will the rest of your work.